Wednesday, March 14, 2012

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My inquiry question is "Is Music to Blame for Youth Violence". I chose this because I love music, and almost everyone listens to it. I have heard people debating about this before, so I thought it would be interesting.

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  1. I really like how you got straight to the point in this entry but that also is what leaves me asking for more. You were sort of vague in what exactly about the music is blamed for the violence, and maybe an example of what you found through your research would make it a bit better. Overall I think your topic is very interesting, especially since during class we read a book that had a lot to do with this subject matter. Being someone who has to read a lot on your topic, I feel this will help explain things that were mentioned in the book that I may not have been completely sure about originally! Very helpful!
    -Kaitlynn

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